I’ve received feedback from my tutor on assignment 4 and based on the comments there is a need to firstly, address the poor sound quality and secondly reconsider the narrative flow. The tutors report is below: Ashley Lauryssen 4 This is the final revised version of the assignment based on the tutor comments: The feedback from… Continue reading Assignment 4 – Tutor Feedback and Final Version

For this assignment I have chosen to cover the wheat harvest in the Moselle Valley, Germany. I was fortunate enough to get the agreement of one of the local farmers to film him and his family during the wheat harvest which takes place over a period of about five to seven days at the beginning… Continue reading Assignment 4 – Constructing a narrative

As I work my way through Part 4 of the course, Assignment 4 looms at the end. The big challenge for this assignment is finding a topic for the documentary that: Has enough visual material to be interesting Has enough of a story to keep the audience attention In addition, whatever topic is chosen, it… Continue reading Planning Assignment 4