Assignment 2 – Tutor Feedback and Final Version
I’ve received very positive feedback from my tutor on Assignment 2 and am encouraged by the report. The report is attached: Ashley Lauryssen 2 – Tutor report The main correction I needed to address, as a result of the feedback, was the transition between Joe walking in the corridor and then eating in the storeroom. For… Continue reading Assignment 2 – Tutor Feedback and Final Version