I’ve received very positive feedback from my tutor on Assignment 2 and am encouraged by the report.

The report is attached:

Ashley Lauryssen 2 – Tutor report

The main correction I needed to address, as a result of the feedback, was the transition between Joe walking in the corridor and then eating in the storeroom. For the final version I have added a shot of Joe entering the storeroom. I was able to achieve a great shadow on the door as Joe approaches it, which I am very happy with.

This is the final version:

 

NOTE: The original video and accompanying notes are in the entry “Assignment 2”.